The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph provides information concerning the average
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of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the
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that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in time schedules and units.
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, it can be clearly seen that people are more likely to visit a museum in summer than in winter.
To begin
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with summer, the
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of people dramatically increased from 0 to about 1300 at 10.30 before slightly rising to approximately 1500 at 11.30 which is the highest
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of visitors in the UK. The biggest decrease was at 12.00 because the
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sharply reduced to 1100 at 13.30, 850 at 14.30, and 0 at 18.00. Moving on to winter, the
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was moderately enlarged and dropped 3 times until it reached the peak of 600 at 11.30 before a significant decrease to 0 at 14.30 until the museum was closed.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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