The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart represents information about the standard of temperature per month in three big cities called Paris ,Dubai and Sydney.
As observed in the details, Paris and Sydney have weather temperatures below 25
degrees
Celsius during the year. Hence
these cities have been involved in rainy and snowy climates in the majority of months, especially in Jan, Feb, Mar, Nov, and Dec months showing that air temperatures get between 5 to 10 Celsius in Paris town. Moreover
, it is observed at approximately 10-15 degrees
in Jun, Jul, and Aug in Sydney city.
On the other hand
, Dubai City does not have cold weather during the year. Indeed, their individuals are using a climate of 20-35 degrees
on a yearly basis. So, it is said that Dubai citizens are experiencing high temperatures of about 35 degrees
in Jul, Aug, and Sep.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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