The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow diagram shows the production of

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane.

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, the production process of

sugar

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consits

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consists

of 7 distinct stages.

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, the

sugar

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cane is used as the raw material. As shown in the diagram, the production starts with the growing of the

sugar

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canes which take about 12-18 months to grow completely. After that, the

growed

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sugar

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canes

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cane

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are

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harvested in two different ways; by hand and by special trucks.

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, the harvested canes are

being

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apply

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crushed and turned into a kind of juice. In the fourth

stage

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the produced juice is purified through a filter called

limestone

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filter. The fifth stage starts with evaporating the purified liquid by applying heat which all liquids

became

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syrup. The next step involves separating the

sugar

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crystals from the produced syrup via

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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in the factory.

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the

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stage, the

sugar

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crystals are dried and cooled and become ready as an end product for consumers.