The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow diagram shows the production of
sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, the production process of sugar
consits
of 7 distinct stages. Correct your spelling
consists
Also
, the sugar
cane is used as the raw material.
As shown in the diagram, the production starts with the growing of the sugar
canes which take about 12-18 months to grow completely. After that, the growed
Correct your spelling
grown
sugar
canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
are
harvested in two different ways; by hand and by special trucks. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Then
, the harvested canes are being
crushed and turned into a kind of juice. In the fourth Unnecessary verb
apply
stage
the produced juice is purified through a filter called Add a comma
stage,
limestone
filter. The fifth stage starts with evaporating the purified liquid by applying heat which all liquids Correct article usage
a limestone
became
syrup. The next step involves separating the Wrong verb form
become
sugar
crystals from the produced syrup via centrifuge
in the factory. Correct article usage
a centrifuge
At
the Change preposition
In
last
stage, the sugar
crystals are dried and cooled and become ready as an end product for consumers.Submitted by z.rajabi on
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