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Some people say that the best to way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities, others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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 staying healthy. We get the numerous benefits from
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 a few times a week. Science has proved that when we
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 facilities would be a good way to motivate the community. It gives the chance to the people to stay healthy within their radius. Sometimes the length stops people from going to the gym or
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; protein, carbohydrates, and vitamins is
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 extremely vital. In my opinion, there is no harm with increasing the amount of sports facilities as long as the people are aware
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 how to have a good diet to have the maximum benefit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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