Some people believe that residents are responsible for keeping the roads clean and others say that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public space always maintains issues. One of them is keeping the
roads
clean. Some people assert
that is
the
goverment's
Correct your spelling
government's
responsibility.
However
, in my point of view,
residents
are responsible for
this
matter.
Accordingly
,
this
essay is going to discuss both views on
this
issue.
Firstly
, the
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
should be responsible for keeping the
roads
clean because of many
reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons
show examples
.
For instance
, the government can take the appropriate action for all
residents
such
as
banned
Wrong verb form
banning
show examples
wastes
Fix the agreement mistake
waste
show examples
in public
space
Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
show examples
. Parallel to
this
, they can issue some penalty rules based on their issued bans.
Therefore
, the
residents
are always trying to abide by the regulations because they do not want to be claimed, or even
got
Correct your spelling
go
show examples
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
court.
In addition
, the government has abilities to establish public cleaner systems in any particular
areas
Fix the agreement mistake
area
show examples
because of their strong
finacial
Correct your spelling
financial
ability.
According to
this
ground, the
roads
always
Add a missing verb
are always
show examples
clean even if there are any person
violated
Wrong verb form
violate
show examples
the rules.
On the other hand
, in my opinion,
residents
must be responsible for keeping the public spaces clean based on a number of sources. The first is the dirty sources on the
roads
. The
wastes
Fix the agreement mistake
waste
show examples
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
always generated
from
Change preposition
by
show examples
residents
. Specifically, if
every one
Replace the word
everyone
show examples
has
awared
Correct your spelling
awarded
aware
about
Change preposition
of
show examples
the benefits of fresh public space,
then
they do not intend to pass the waste on the
roads
or
using
Wrong verb form
use
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
public transportation to contribute to a green environment, so there are clean
roads
.
Furthermore
,
residents
are responsible for keeping the
roads
clean can save money because in
this
case, the
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
or
residents
do not need to pay
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
show examples
for contributing
regulations
Change preposition
to regulations
show examples
or enforcing the
regulation
Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
show examples
, even public cleaner systems. In conclusion,
residents
Correct word choice
if residents
show examples
are the original problem,
then
they need to be responsible for keeping the
roads
clean.
Submitted by huong.bx on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response
Ensure that all the points mentioned in the prompt are addressed in the essay and provide a clear opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical structure in the essay. Use paragraphs to separate and develop each idea.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use a wider range of words and phrases to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Work on improving your sentence structure and grammar accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence construction.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: