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Environment damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who is responsible for preventing environmental damage?

#environment #damage #countries
In today's globalizing world,
environment
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 is
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 vital problem around the globe. There are a large number of reasons for
this
 phenomenon but from my point of view, I believe that
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carbon emission and deforestation are the main culprits of the deterioration of
environment
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.
Therefore
, it is necessary for both
individuals
 and
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governments to ensure accountability to solve the problem. The two main factors
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that causes
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causes
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to
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this
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these
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 problems are air pollution and logging.
Firstly
, the excessive growth of population and industrial production result
to
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in
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the
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an
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 increase in the number of
transportations
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transportation
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 in
this
 world. The large number of vehicles operated by fossil fuel releases tons of carbon gas every single day. These substances are generally considered as the key factor destroying earth's
ozon
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ozone
 layer, which
protecting
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 humankind from
detrimental
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the detrimental
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 effects of UV rays. The second point is that
,
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 overpopulation and timber harvesting have a negative impact on natural creatures. People cut down the tree to produce consumer products,
such
 as
chair
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chairs
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 and houses.
As a result
, many tropical forests
where
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are the houses of billions
wild
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of wild
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 animals and sectors and frequent occurrence of natural disasters, which creates an imbalance in the whole ecosystem. Both citizens and the
government
 are accountable for the issue of environmental damage. Obliviously, each person is responsible for not doing harm
the
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environment
 as
it
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shown in their daily life which directly
impact
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impacts
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 the habitat.
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, provide that
individuals
awareness
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were aware
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 of reducing and recycling plastic use on
daily
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a daily
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 basis, the total amount of
this
 substance disposed to
environment
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the environment
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 would dramatically decrease.
In addition
, the
government
 are equally
significant
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accountable for the issue of
environment
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the environment
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. It is necessary for the
government
 to introduce strict
law
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laws
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 as a way to prevent and punish any
individuals
 and companies to not causing harm to the
environment
.
Beside
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 that the activities of
government
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the government
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 have a strong influence
to
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on
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 citizens rather than
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others. In conclusion, there are many
of
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reasons causes of environmental damage, but the major ones are air
pollutions
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pollution
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 and deforestation. I believe that protecting the
environment
 is the obligation of both the
government
 and
individuals
.
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