The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
the
American families by their annual Correct article usage
apply
earning
(in dollars) in the years of 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
Overall
, it can be seen that the group of people (between 100000 and more) earned maximum in terms of number of households in 2007 and 2015. On the hand
, those who had less income in 2011 Correct word choice
other hand
was
the group of people earning between 75000$ and 99999$.
The group of households whose income below 25000$ was around 25 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
millions
in 2007, Change to singular
million
whereas
the figure was around slightly below than
27% in case of earning between 25000$ and 49000$. Both these figuresChange preposition
apply
,
increased to above 28% in 2011, but these values decreased to 27% (below 25000$) and 28% (between 25000$ and 49999$) in 2015. In Remove the comma
apply
case
of Correct article usage
the case
family
earning between 50000$ and 74999$, theCorrect article usage
a family
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