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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of
the
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American families by their annual
earning
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earnings
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 (in dollars) in the years of 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the group of people (between 100000 and more) earned maximum in terms of number of households in 2007 and 2015. On the
hand
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, those who had less income in 2011
was
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were
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 the group of people earning between 75000$ and 99999$. The group of households whose income below 25000$ was around 25
millions
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million
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 in 2007,
whereas
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 the figure was around slightly below
than
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27% in case of earning between 25000$ and 49000$. Both these figures
,
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 increased to above 28% in 2011, but these values decreased to 27% (below 25000$) and 28% (between 25000$ and 49999$) in 2015. In
case
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the case
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 of
family
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a family
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 earning between 50000$ and 74999$, the

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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