In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is true that these days, companies insist that their
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are new and different to the others for several reasons and they
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on
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issue in their advertisements.
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, I believe that it is a kind of positive development for a variety of reasons which will be discussed in the following essay. Nowadays, employers make every effort to distinguish their
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from
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and they show it in their commercials.
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, the number of the same product is too high that it is hard for people to decide to buy which one.
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, it is a problem for the companies and their advertisement team to compete with other businesses to sell
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a product and persuade
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society to pay for that.
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, a carpet factory in Iran
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that if an
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can find a carpet cheaper than their
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, they will impose a fine
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that customer.
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, because of the similarity of
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and
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trust
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an
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for people whenever they want to buy something.
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, companies and their
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group should emphasise on differences
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their production and their advantages.
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, managers should use every creativity in their announcements to show the advantages and positive points of their produce in order to encourage the community to give them a chance and buy their
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.
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way of propaganda
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seems to me a beneficial development because of its effect on people's minds.
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an
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individual
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to buy
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stuff, he/she
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to
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all aspects of
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produce
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product
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as the colour, material, quality, and even
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ease of use.
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,
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, the
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usage
of all
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products
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are
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similar, they have slight differences which
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them from each other.
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, these small differences can affect
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consumers'
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. In conclusion, businesses are focusing on the different points of their outputs to encourage the community and
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them to buy their
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,
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kind of announcement has several good benefits for them.
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task response
Ensure that all aspects of the prompt are addressed in the essay and provide a clear opinion on whether the emphasis on new products is positive or negative.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and organized structure throughout the essay. Connect ideas logically and ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use a wider range of words and phrases. This will enhance your ability to express ideas more precisely and effectively.
grammatical range
Continue to work on your grammar skills, paying attention to sentence structure and verb agreement.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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