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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admission tutor. In your letter, • explain your position • apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day • also ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I, Urvashi Bhavsar, a student for an
interview
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 in the Post-graduation program for Health and Science at
University
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the University
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 of Alberta on 2 November
,
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apply
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 2023 at 2.pm. Hereby, I would like to inform
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you that
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 unfortunately, I have an important medical appointment on the same day
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 I am not able to attend an
interview
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 on 2 November, 2023. I extend my sincere apology for
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the
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 cancellation of the
interview
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 and I would like to request
for
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apply
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an
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another appointment for the
interview
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.
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, If you give more information about the
interview
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 process that would be really helpful. I wanted to know how long will be an
interview
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 or
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if is
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 there any
kinds
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kind
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 of exam during an
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. Thank you for offering an
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in
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at
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 the prestigious University. I look forward
for
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to
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response
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your response
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. If you want any
further
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 details, please do not hesitate to reach out to me. Regards, Urvashi Bhavsar
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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