It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nature or nurture theory has been a controversial issue for many years and there are two different views about it. Some believe that a professional athlete or musician is born with a specific skill,

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others think that children can be trained to achieve their goals in different areas. I would say both arguments have validity, but I would lean towards the latter. On the one hand, the defining influence of talents can be explained by genes. Scientifically speaking, every individual

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born with special genes and

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of DNA which are inherited from their parents and ancestors.

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, height definitely is given to

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by his/her parents or grandparents. So, it is

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to attribute certain talents to the genetics and the structure of the DNA.

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, we have to consider the effects of education on becoming

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in any

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because people have the ability to be trained.

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,

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being's brain is created with

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many rooms to improve

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grow and prosper.

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claim can be proved by the fact that every infant steps

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universe without knowing and

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of time and obviously the environment

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education exert tremendous effects on them and turn them into a mature person who

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many skills. So, human, by nature, is ready to acquire and develop many abilities. By way of illustration, Serena Williams, one of the most decorated athletes in the world of tennis admitted that many coaches rejected her at first but after many years of

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she gained many successes in many tournaments. In conclusion, I hold the view that

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inner-born talents are important in order for a child to become successful, educating and training a child are critical factors in the process of raising them.