The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These line graph information
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about total fule value from 2000 to 2005, and data exported manufactured
goods
, fuel, and food in same
years
by one country. It is clear from the graph that fuel and manufactured
goods
decreased, but the food was almost the same.
According to
what is shown, the file exports in 2000 was 30 million
dollars
.
while
it was best in 2002 with about 250000.
However
, In 2000, 3 million
dollars
.
while
it was
loest
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lost
lowest
after 2
years
with about 250000, but in 2005 was
highest
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the highest
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value (430000). From 2000 to 2002 the total value was around 5 million.
Then
, was jumped to almost 34000
dollars
.
whereas
, food takes almost similar behaviour to expect in 2001.
Moreover
, manufactured
goods
in first
years
was top vale around 48,000.
Then
, it dropped
until
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2 billion
dollars
after 5
years
.
while
manufactured
goods
exports were wave behaviour.
To sum up
, we could say that they do not have the same relationship.
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