Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In our current world where productivity is considered a key

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aspect, there is a growing concern about unifying

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age

for all types of

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jobs

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what damage it can do to the

economy

will be provided. The supporting side of

such

unification would argue that employees should retire at the same

age

because it ensures

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social justice between them. they might say that allowing early

retirement

would harm organizations and companies which has been spending a significant amount of resources to develop an expert staff. Where

this

argument might be valid, it is important to take the safety and risks associated with the

job

in question to fairly calculate the

retirement

age

.

On the other hand

, there are many reasons to reject

this

narrative.

Firstly

, it is obvious that the

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with different work can vary significantly. As an example, Labor-intensive jobs might lead to some serious injuries and disabilities caused by the

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,

whereas

the risk of

such

accidents might be drastically lower in office jobs.

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, the fatigue that can be caused by

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labor-intensive

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work can have a toll on one's health after a significant amount of time.

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,

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case unified

retirement

age

is implemented, people would opt out from taking on labor-demanding

carriers

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and

instead

seek a comfortable desk

job

, which will create an unbalance in the market

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will have a negative impact on

economy

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. In light of the above arguments, it is important to take

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, safety, and

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needs of one's

job

into consideration

while

setting the proper

age

of

retiring

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, where a set in stone

age

would not be fair for the people, but it would hurt

economy

as well.