You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am the
akanksha
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Akanksha
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, from your latest finished batch. I wanted to share my feedback on your
biriyani
spacial
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special
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one week
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course
. The
course
was amazing and I learned a lot
of
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about
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a varity
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varity
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variety
of dishes of
biriyani
from
you
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apply
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zero to end
like
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veg to non-veg
biriyani
. before I
was
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did
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not
knowing
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know
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that I
can
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could
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cook
this
in 20
diffierent
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different
ways.
especialy
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especially
i
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I
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like the chopping of
vegatables
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vegetables
in different
diferen
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different
style
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which enhance the look of the
biriyani
was the most
fevoret
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favourite
favoured
part of your
course
. After
joinging
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joining
your class
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I
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got so much inspired
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toward
the
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cooking.
i
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I
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starded enjoing
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started enjoying
the cooking by my
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heart
and
ofcourse evryone
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of course everyone
in my house started liking my
coocking
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cooking
. I have tried almost 18 new
recepis
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recipes
which was so
ummey
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yummy
.
Moreover
my children like cack but
i
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I
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dont
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don't
know how to make it. I request you to bring
cack
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back
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making
course
. I would love to join that
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sessions
session
as soon as
posible
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possible
. Thank you
to teach
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me tips and tricks which will make our daily life cooking easy. I look forward
for
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to
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Your new
course
to
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join
joing
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join
Your's faithfully Akansha H.
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