The graph below shows unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about the
unemployment
and emigration
rate
in Ireland between 1988 and 2008.Overall
, it is obvious that although
the incidence of emigration
reduced from 1990 to 1998,there was a sharp growth in the unemployment
rate
in this
period.However
,both categories witnessed a rise between 2004 and 2088.
According to
1988 and 1998,the emigration
category stood at around 15% in 1988 and the unemployment
rate
accounted for roughly 17%.After two years,there was a considerable decline to 15% and about 13% in terms of emigration
and unemployment
respectively.However
,the rate
of unemployment
recovered in 1992 while
the percentage of people who left Ireland reduced sharply to approximately 9%.There was a fluctuation in the rate
of emigration
which was around 7% from 1992 to 1998.Likewise
,the rate
of unemployed people decreased the the same proportion at the same time.
Regarding the period of 1998 to 2008,although
the emigration
category saw an oscillation to 2004,the percentage of unemployment
fell dramatically.In contrast
, there was an increase in both categories between 2004 to 2008.The migration peaked at roughly 15% and unemployment
at about 6%.Submitted by mirhashemim7 on
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