The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The design presents the method of
electricity
generation in a hydroelectric power
station
. The leading part of the process is done in the power
station
which generates electricity
. The station
has three main sections to produce electricity
- the high-level reservoir
, power
Correct article usage
the power
station
and the low-level reservoir
- that use water
from the river to produce electricity
, and the produced electricity
is then
transferred to the national grid.
Initially
, the river water
flows into the dam through the high-level reservoir
. This
flow of water
generates electricity
in the daytime, and this
water
is stored in the turbine. The turbine helps to operate a generator in the daytime. During the night phase, the excess water
saved in the low-level reservoir
is returned to the turbine. Then
the water
is sent back into the low-level reservoir
which remains closed at night. This
flow of water
helps the power
station
produce electricity
.
The generated electricity
is then
sent to the national grid through power
lines while
the excess water
runs to a low-level reservoir
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