The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line diagram shows data about
Dubai
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Dubai's
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gold
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sales in 2002.
Overall
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it is undeniable that the
gold
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trading in March
was
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reached a peak 350 million of dirhams. All the period of the graph fluctuated over
year
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a year
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time. Turning to
main
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the main
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part, the
most bad
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worst
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month
to
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for
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the
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apply
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Dubai was
april
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April
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, given that
gold
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sales dramatically dropped.
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, subsequent months
also
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decrease
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decreased
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the price of
gold
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, but a decrease was
a
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apply
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gradually and steadily until
juli
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Juli
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. From
juli
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july
to
october
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October
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a
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progress
was sharply fluctuated
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sharply fluctuated
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.
Then
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martinally
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finally
climbed to the initial cost of
golds
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gold
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gold with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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