The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line diagram shows data about
Dubai
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Dubai's
gold
sales in 2002.
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Overall
it is undeniable that the Linking Words
gold
trading in March Use synonyms
was
reached a peak 350 million of dirhams. All the period of the graph fluctuated over Unnecessary verb
apply
year
time.
Turning to Add an article
a year
main
part, the Add an article
the main
most bad
month Change the adjective
worst
to
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for
the
Dubai was Correct article usage
apply
april
, given that Change the capitalization
April
gold
sales dramatically dropped. Use synonyms
However
, subsequent months Linking Words
also
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decrease
the price of Wrong verb form
decreased
gold
, but a decrease was Use synonyms
a
gradually and steadily until Correct article usage
apply
juli
. From Change the capitalization
Juli
juli
to Correct your spelling
july
october
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October
a
progress Remove the article
apply
was sharply fluctuated
. Change to the active voice
sharply fluctuated
has sharply fluctuated
Then
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martinally
climbed to the initial cost of Correct your spelling
finally
golds
.Fix the agreement mistake
gold
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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