The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The first line graph shows changes
to
the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. The second data shows the total annual Change preposition
in
hours
of sunshine
in London, New York
and Sydney.
It is clear that
New York
has the highest temperature
during summer and the lowest during winter. New York
's temperature
influenced
by the annual Add a missing verb
is influenced
hours
of sunshine
which is the highest among the other.
The first line graph shows changes to
the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. The second data shows the total annual Change preposition
in
hours
of sunshine
in London, New York
and Sydney.
It is clear that
New York
has the highest temperature
during summer and the lowest during winter. New York
's temperature
influenced
by the annual Add a missing verb
is influenced
hours
of sunshine
which is the highest among the other.
The first line graph shows changes to
the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. The second data shows the total annual Change preposition
in
hours
of sunshine
in London, New York
and Sydney.
It is clear that
New York
has the highest temperature
during summer and the lowest during winter. New York
's temperature
influenced
by the annual Add a missing verb
is influenced
hours
of sunshine
which is the highest among the other.Submitted by shirokuade on
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