The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014
The linear illustration depicts information about the annual expenditure of tourists of New Zealand from five different areas over a span of 8 years.
Overall
, all of the lines have experienced a fluctuation and made dramatic changes during the period.
First of all, the most vigorous to invest time in New Zealand traveling
was Australia and its peak was in 2006 with almost 2500 Change the spelling
travelling
dollars
. Conversely
, the minimum expenditure spent
by China and it only achieved 500 Add a missing verb
was spent
dollars
, while
the UK
and Japan have initiated the
similar budget.
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a
Furthermore
, the USA is the second to purchase New Zealand traveling
after Australia, since approximately 1750 Change the spelling
travelling
dollars
were spent in 2010. Also
, Japan spent roughly over 1000 dollars
in 2002, while
the UK
spent the minimum of funds in the same year which is approximately 250 dollars
. After years, Japan started to spend less money than the UK
and the UK
reached its peak in 2012 with probably 1000 dollars
.Submitted by dnm.best on
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