Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

We can divide countries as

per

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developed, developing and poor

according to

infrastructure facilities and any other guides

relavent

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relevant

to categorization. Most governments spend

lot

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of money

for

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on

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railways than public roads. In

this

essay, I would like to briefly explain the reasons; for fully

agree

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with

this

topic. As

a new generation women

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a new generation woman

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, I would like to see about

this

point so, railways are

eco friendly

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transport

mode, which

are

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is

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most developed countries have been

use

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using

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. Trains engine capacities are higher than the local bus but comparing

total

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the total

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amount of public

transport

buses it is lower.

however

, one train release too low

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

( Co2) rather than 100 buses and

also

one train can provide more

transport

facilities to

plethora

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a plethora

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of transporters. In the rails, They

use

own

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their own

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common way to run and stop. So

due to

that

reason

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reason,

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we can

be decrease

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decrease

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traffic

jam

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, which is a great problem

to

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for

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urban areas. Not only that but

also

it

decrease

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decreases

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consumption

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the consumption

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of fuel which is

use

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used

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by

train

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a train

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engine. So

been

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being

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a

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an

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ecofriendly woman, It is a great idea that has been government taken. Neither,

eco friendly

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nor the head to traffic violence.

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,

for

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enter to Colombo

City

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we had to wait

long

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in long

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queue

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to

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for

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a number of big and small vehicles.

Someone

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use

vehicle

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a vehicle

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to

self

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self-transport

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transport

and

according to

him/her it's

their

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required, but

according to

my view

if

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you

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if we

use

trains

for

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to

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transport

plethora

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a plethora

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of people. We can go for our destinate

as per

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earlier than our time.

Therefore

, accidents,

time wasting

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, fuel consumption and

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environmental

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environment

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environmental

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pollution

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pollutions

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pollution

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are decreased. In conclusion, by constructing Railways we have great facilities rather than developing roads and

government

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the government

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can reduce the unnecessary events of accidents and diseases combined with pollution.