At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some politicians often attribute the demographic

characteristic

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of a

country

to the

country

's economic performance.

In particular

, if the nation is constituted with a majority of young adults

instead

of a retired population,

an

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economic growth is often

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expected.

Nonetheless

, can

this

point of view withstand any testimony? It is undoubtedly that young individuals are the engines of a

country

's development. Economically, they are at their golden age to contribute

in

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productive exercises that drive the

country

's Gross Domestic Production.

Likewise

, in the social aspect, those adults experience a steeper learning curve which facilitates them to abruptly absorb new knowledge and effectively generate innovative ideas that promote social advancement.

On the other hand

, some opponents may counter-argue that senior people can help

stablize

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the

rapid

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changing society. Nowadays a lot of

blue collar

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jobs,

for

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street cleaning, parcel delivery and

baby sitting

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, are indeed carried out by those elderly. Because of

this

, we can free the junior group of people

out

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to focus on other comparatively intense tasks. Meanwhile, the

senior

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can share their wisdom to protect the younger generation from potential failures.

However

, considering the above-mentioned merits and drawbacks, I

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towards having more young blood in the society than the elderly. Only by optimizing our productivity and boosting our economy with the most energizing population, our civilization can

then

sustain. Needless to mention

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old people sometimes exhaust our medical resources and

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considered as a burden.