The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates data about the proportion of the

population

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in four Asian nations settling in cities between 1970 to 2020,

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for 2030 and 2040.

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, during

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seventy-year period, Malaysia remains the country with the largest

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, with all three other countries have more less people on them. In 1970, the

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of Indonesia were the

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lowest

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,

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the people of

Philippines

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the Philippines

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, Malaysia and Thailand were considerably higher.

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, since 2010, the

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of Indonesia increased gradually,

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the

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of citizens of

Philippines

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the Philippines

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indicated

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decrease. As can be seen from the graph, from 1990, individuals

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in

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Malaysia showed a sharp growth and will have been

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trend gradually until 2040. Meanwhile, the

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of Thailand increased slightly until 2020,

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will grow step by step.