The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates data about the proportion of the
population
in four Asian nations settling in cities between 1970 to 2020, Change preposition
with prediction
prediction
for 2030 and 2040.
Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
Overall
, during this
seventy-year period, Malaysia remains the country with the largest population
, with all three other countries have more less people on them.
In 1970, the population
of Indonesia were the least
, Correct word choice
lowest
while
the people of Philippines
, Malaysia and Thailand were considerably higher. Correct article usage
the Philippines
However
, since 2010, the population
of Indonesia increased gradually, when
the Correct word choice
while
quantity
of citizens of Change the quantifier
number
Philippines
indicated Correct article usage
the Philippines
Add an article
a fluctuated
fluctuated
decrease.
As can be seen from the graph, from 1990, individuals Wrong verb form
fluctuating
of
Malaysia showed a sharp growth and will have been Change preposition
in
keep
Change the verb form
keeping
kept
this
trend gradually until 2040. Meanwhile, the population
of Thailand increased slightly until 2020, then
will grow step by step.Submitted by dnm.best on
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