The pie charts below show the online shopping slaes for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selectoing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the internet purchasing sales for four retail sections namely travel, films / music, books and clothes in
ten
Correct determiner usage
a
years
period, between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand.
In general, travel was the biggest portion of the graph in 2003 Correct your spelling
ten-year
while
this
had a decrease in 2013 and so, film/ music became the highest section. Also
, the clothes were the least proportion.
According to
the pie chart, firstly
, travel with 36 per cent was the dominant position in the first period but this
matter is not true in the second period. Secondly
, the film segment with a 12% increase during the 10 years became the largest buying which was 33%.
On the other hand
, initially
, the books retail was the lowest part in the first year(19%) whereas
this
rose in the last
year(22%). Finally
, in terms of the clothes sector, this
plummeted from just under a quarter to a minority (16%).Submitted by omranz2013 on
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