Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every
country
tries to give the best Use synonyms
education
for their children with Use synonyms
plethora
of Add an article
a plethora
facilities
, like free books, free uniforms and free Use synonyms
education
. Some people thinkUse synonyms
,
some professionals like doctors and engineers must Remove the comma
apply
be
work in the Unnecessary verb
apply
country
; Use synonyms
that
were educated, after Correct pronoun usage
they
the
their Remove the article
apply
are
training period and others believe Unnecessary verb
apply
opposite
Add an article
the opposite
side
of that,which is Use synonyms
government
should give free to work Use synonyms
any
other Change preposition
in any
country
.
To commence with, Use synonyms
number
of countries are not developed, they are developing. So their Change the article
a number
the number
government
gave Use synonyms
plethora
of Add an article
a plethora
facilities
Use synonyms
according to
their budget. Linking Words
Education
is Use synonyms
an
one of Correct article usage
apply
Correct article usage
the thing
thing
and free Fix the agreement mistake
things
education
is Use synonyms
great
thing. As a skilled worker, who were educated thank to Add an article
a great
Use synonyms
government
, Correct article usage
the government
Use synonyms
government
will Add an article
the government
be expected
most thing from that worker. Those are, Wrong verb form
expect
develop
the technical Wrong verb form
developing
side
, educational Use synonyms
side
, health and Use synonyms
wellbeing
and vocational Correct your spelling
well-being
side
etc. So we want enough knowledge of bright trainers to Use synonyms
implementation
Replace the word
implement
to
those areas.
As for Change preposition
in
instant
, a doctor who is the best surgeon for liver operationsReplace the word
instance
,
migrates to another Remove the comma
apply
country
. we lose that bright knowledge and we could not train medical surgical students Use synonyms
Linking Words
furthermore
. Rephrase
further
According to
the Linking Words
public
it is Add a comma
public,
a normal news
because they do not know the depth of that and the disadvantages of that. As the day by Remove the article
normal news
a piece of normal news
go
we have to face a lack of degree holders.
Add a comma
go,
On the other hand
, if the Linking Words
government
gave free Use synonyms
education
, every person have a right to choose their own opinion. If we Use synonyms
did
not give a chance to Wrong verb form
do
theirs
wishes they may Correct pronoun usage
their
be stay
, but we can not get proper creative productivity from them. Change the verb form
be staying
be stayed
Sometime
it occurs to deliver unemployees more than Replace the word
Sometimes
skill
workers, Replace the word
skilled
Linking Words
moreover
it can Add a comma
moreover,
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
happend
to increase institutional arguments. These Correct your spelling
happened
happen
side
effects must Use synonyms
be develop
Change the verb form
be developed
due to
Linking Words
man
rights.
In conclusion, Change noun form
men's
if
the Correct word choice
apply
government
should give enough Use synonyms
facilities
to doctors and engineers; like Use synonyms
salary
should be increased and Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
facilities
to get loans from Banks. If the Use synonyms
government
gives Use synonyms
those thing
, we can stop migration. if they do not receive Change the determiner
that thing
those things
those kind
of Change the determiner
that kind
those kinds
facilities
, every worker has a right to do anything like migration.Use synonyms
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