The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs illustrate how delivering parcels changed between 1920 and 2000 by two major mail services:

FedEx

and

TNT

.

Overall

,

FedEx

had better numbers at the beginning of the given period. But in the end,

TNT

took the "throne" over

FedEx

, showing steady growth. In 1920, it is observed that

FedEx

delivered 15000

percels

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parcels

per cent

, which is 10000 units more than

TNT

. They reached a peak in 1940, showing almost 25000

percels

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per cent

parcels

,

while

TNT

continued to

rose

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steadily.

Then

happened

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sudden

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fall to 12000 and stood unchanged until the next decade,

while

TNT

showed

remarkable

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rise, reaching almost

to

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the same index as their competitors. By 1970,

FedEx

increased the difference between competitors to about 7000 units. After the little increase to 1000 units,

FedEx

remained stable until the end of the given period when

TNT

showed

sharp

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rise in 1990 and left behind

FedEx

. In the following decade,

TNT

reached a peak, standing at about 25000 parcels.