New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Today's rapidly evolving world accompanies the increasing advent of

technology

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led to a shift in

children

's spare-time activities.

However

,

this

development carries both merits and demerits. In

this

essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions.

To begin

, let's delve into the advantages of technological advancement in

children

's free time. One of the main positives of

technology

is

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access to more diverse and more helpful types of entertainment.

For instance

,

technology

has invented a new way of playing and learning, educational apps, in which knowledge is skillfully incorporated into fun, interactive

games

.

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apps include

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essential, core subjects like mathematics and sciences to social subjects

such

as foreign languages, arts, music, etc, allowing kids to broaden their horizons much more effectively. Another benefit is the

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opportunity

to practice soft skills.

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, role-play or

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online

games

often require problem-solving

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, critical thinking, and

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harmonious teamwork. By frequently playing these

games

,

children

can continuously practice soft skills that are extremely practical for their future. On the flip side, one disadvantage of

technology

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the uncontrollable

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of harmful online

games

,

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and videos. To be specific, many violent factors are currently underlying

games

for kids. These contents can lead to

children

's violence, actions out of control, disorientation, or even depression.

Secondly

, it is undeniable that the more time

children

spend

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playing computer

games

, the less time they could spend in joining outdoor activities.

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negative trend can

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from the addictive factors of video

games

and social media

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and is one of the main contributors to kids' health degradation and obesity these days. In conclusion, the invention of advanced technologies

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both pros and cons.

While

, what technologies can offer to

children

nowadays is, of course, essential, the detrimental effects on

children

's mental and physical health are formidable drawbacks. Personally, I believe that the evolution of

technology

is inevitable and will provide

children

with huge advantages,

however

, how

children

can use and access

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these new technologies should be put under the control of adults.