The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. 

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how renting books changed in a British local library over a period of 12 months in 2009. It is observed that in the first month of the
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, 10 books were rented. In the following 2 months, the
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decreased by almost 2 times. Rents in April doubled compared to the previous month. The
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stood between 14 and 15 until August, when observed a remarkable increase reaching 20 units.
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there was a quick drop to 8 units and after a slight rose, it reached
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weakest
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in the second half of the
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showing 9 rents. A peak reached in the
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month of the
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, standing at 21 rented books.
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, the
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stood stable in the middle of the
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.
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, they were at their highest
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of the given period
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the weakest rent figures could be observed in February.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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