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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table compares the
budget
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 for
police
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 provided through different sources, and the bar chart shows different areas
which
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in which
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 the
budget
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 was spent in the years 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the National Government provided the highest amount of
police
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 funding in that period. We can
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 see that the money was mainly spent on staff and officers' salaries. In 2017, three organizations were responsible for providing the
police
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budget
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.
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, 175.5m euro was prepared by NG which was by far the highest amount,
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, the figure was 177.8m euro in 2018.
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, local taxes and other sources were the other contributors to the
police
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 funding leading to a total amount of 3.4.7m in 2017 and 31.6 in 2018.
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 the bar chart, more than two-thirds of the earned
budget
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 was allocated to staff salaries,
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, only 17% was dedicated to construction and transportation in the years 2017 and 2018.
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, technology consumed 8% of the
budget
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 in 2017.
whereas
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, it was 14% in 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, police with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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