Write about the following topic: In certain countries, the number of people who use bicycles as the main means of transport is decreasing even though it is beneficial both physically and environmentally. What can be the reasons for this change in preference? How can people be encouraged to use bicycles? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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in some countries, some

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both physically and

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environmentally

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enlarge

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bicycles.

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for cycling

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every

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afford and take care of it.

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administration

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working hours.

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task response

Ensure your essay addresses all parts of the prompt. You did not discuss the reasons for the decrease in bicycle usage, which was the main focus of the first question.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the organization and coherence of your essay. Present your ideas in a clear and logical manner with appropriate linking words. Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and support them with relevant examples and details.

lexical resource

Expand your vocabulary and use a range of words and phrases to express ideas more precisely. Avoid repetition and strive for variety in your word choices.

grammatical range

Develop your sentence structure and grammar to convey ideas accurately. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, articles, and sentence construction.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

325 words

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