Write about the following topic: In certain countries, the number of people who use bicycles as the main means of transport is decreasing even though it is beneficial both physically and environmentally. What can be the reasons for this change in preference? How can people be encouraged to use bicycles? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,
People
are more health conscious, so that
in some countries, some Correct word choice
apply
people
are using bicycles as the
main transport it is helpful Change the word
their
for
both physically and Change preposition
apply
enviromentally
. The Correct your spelling
environmentally
government
will be
plan two things first is Unnecessary verb
apply
created
Verb problem
to create
seprate
Correct your spelling
separate
road
for it and Fix the agreement mistake
roads
second
is Add a comma
second,
provided
Wrong verb form
provide
on
a Change preposition
apply
remotely
location. In Change the adverb
remote
this
essay, I will discuss both of points
and how to Correct article usage
the points
encarge
Correct your spelling
enlarge
engage
encourage
people
for used
bicycles.
Change preposition
to use
Firstly
, when people
are looking separate
Change preposition
for separate
road
for cycling Fix the agreement mistake
roads
then
people
more riding. To explain it, on the main road
every Add a comma
road,
vehicle
speed is high as Change noun form
vehicle's
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
cycle
. People
are not feeling safe on that road
. For example
, in the UK government
Correct article usage
the government
providing
Wrong verb form
provides
the
different Correct article usage
apply
road
for both of them so that Fix the agreement mistake
roads
people
easly
going to Correct your spelling
easily
office
, school and for any other activity. Correct article usage
the office
For
Change preposition
As
the
result, Correct article usage
a
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
governement
Correct your spelling
government
are
saving Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
billions of dollars Correct article usage
apply
for
less Change preposition
on
uses
of petrol and diesel.
Fix the agreement mistake
use
On the other hand
, If the government
poviding
Correct your spelling
provides
cycle
on
Change preposition
in
the
remote Correct article usage
apply
location
Fix the agreement mistake
locations
so
like Rephrase
apply
as
metro Change preposition
apply
station
, train Fix the agreement mistake
stations
station
and bus Fix the agreement mistake
stations
stand
Fix the agreement mistake
stands
then
people
are
easily access and cary Verb problem
can
this thing
. Fix the agreement mistake
these things
In other words
, many people
are not using because
they Correct pronoun usage
it because
are not
afford and take care of it. Verb problem
cannot
For instance
, Sweden
administration Change noun form
Sweden's
providing
Wrong verb form
provides
the
mini Correct article usage
a
cycle
stand after
every 2 KM, Change preposition
apply
people
are going
there and scan the bar code Wrong verb form
go
and
Correct word choice
apply
using
Wrong verb form
use
the
Change the word
their
bike
for Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
own
work and park anywhere Correct pronoun usage
their own
cycle
stand. The government
of Sweden to encourge
Correct your spelling
encourage
for
Change preposition
apply
people
providing
bouns if any employee Change the verb form
to provide
reach
in Change the verb form
reaches
office
through cycle
and give Add an article
the cycle
a cycle
also
time relaxtion
Correct your spelling
relaxation
in
working hours. Change preposition
during
For
Change preposition
apply
Hence
, there are 70 % office
Change preposition
of office
emplyoees
Correct your spelling
employees
reached
in Wrong verb form
reach
office
through cycle
.
In conclusion, the Add an article
the cycle
a cycle
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
takes
Wrong verb form
should take
Correct article usage
the initiatives
initiatives
for separate Fix the agreement mistake
initiative
road
and mini bikecycle stand also
plans some events and competition of awareness Correct word choice
and also
for
Change preposition
among
people
and explain the benifical
reason for Correct your spelling
beneficial
heath
and Correct your spelling
health
environment
. It Correct article usage
the environment
is follow
the same philosophy Change the verb form
follows
in
all around the world Change preposition
apply
same
as Correct word choice
apply
Sweden
so Change preposition
in Sweden
that
Correct word choice
apply
people
more
attracted Add a missing verb
are more
for
that.Change preposition
to
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task response
Ensure your essay addresses all parts of the prompt. You did not discuss the reasons for the decrease in bicycle usage, which was the main focus of the first question.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization and coherence of your essay. Present your ideas in a clear and logical manner with appropriate linking words. Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and support them with relevant examples and details.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use a range of words and phrases to express ideas more precisely. Avoid repetition and strive for variety in your word choices.
grammatical range
Develop your sentence structure and grammar to convey ideas accurately. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, articles, and sentence construction.