currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.however, at besy these methods are ineffective,and at worst they may be dangerous to what extent do you afree with this statement?
Nowadays, some people prefer using alternative forms of
medicine
. Use synonyms
Although
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this
method can be useless or even dangerousLinking Words
,
if the person is suffering from allergies or a serious illness. In my view,caution is always needed Remove the comma
apply
while
dealing with health issues. As we know Linking Words
medicine
is a complicated science because patients react differently to some medications, they may Use synonyms
also
show different symptoms which make the Linking Words
diagnostic
harder. For that reason, depending on substitutions other than modern Replace the word
diagnosis
medicine
can only cause complexity or even death. Use synonyms
For instance
, a study showed that 70% of people using alternative Linking Words
medicine
visit the emergency room Use synonyms
due to
complications, Linking Words
while
20% Linking Words
deals
with severe side effects that often Fix the agreement mistake
deal
leads
to death and only 10% show improvement. Change the verb form
lead
Therefore
, others believe that nature is the solution Linking Words
of
our problems and Change preposition
to
adopting
a natural cure can be healthier as we do not enter toxins Correct word choice
that adopting
to
our bodies. Change preposition
into
In addition
, our immune system can take care of it, perhaps a little help from Mother Linking Words
nature
is all we need. Capitalize word
Nature
However
, Linking Words
this
approach can be used in minor Linking Words
illness
Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
such
as flu, headache or a small infection. Linking Words
Otherwise
, the use of anything but modern Linking Words
medicine
can be risky. Use synonyms
To sum up
, Linking Words
while
making decisions about our health we should consider every proposition. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, modern Linking Words
medicine
is trustworthy because it is based on studies and experiments. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
ever
the side effects are identified, which means we know what we are expecting. Rephrase
apply
On the other hand
, alternatives are unpredictable and often unsafe.Linking Words
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