50.The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The illustration demonstrates the way that a
water
filter is made and how it works to produce clean water
.
Overall
, there are several steps which are undertaken to the final water
that could be serving people.
First of all, pour the impure water
into a metal container with cover it up with a wooden lid. The metal container is divided into three levels of filtering layers. Starting with the first level, water
goes into the sand, then
it is soaked into the charcoal and ends with the gravel at the bottom.
At the next stage, a flanked metal pipe is there which is linked to a tank
where the drinking water
is stored. The water
on the upper container passes a pipe to transfer into the storage tank
which is at a lower level than the first tank
. Eventually, a tap is attached to the tank
which provides clean water
to peopleSubmitted by elenazheng1211 on
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