Developing countries require help offered by international organization to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aids is important. Other believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give youw own opinion.
Some say that to ensure the best development of developing
countries
, global organizations should offer only financial resources, Use synonyms
while
others would argue that practical Linking Words
aid
and advice are more useful. Use synonyms
This
essay would argue that Linking Words
although
money can help the nation to get out of bad situations, other resources should be provided for better long-term development.
On the one hand, financial resources will allow developing country solve part of their problems. Linking Words
This
is because many emergent Linking Words
countries
are struggling with problems related to basic infrastructure, Use synonyms
such
as roads and public transportation. Linking Words
Then
, they need financial support to complete these projects and carry out other activities. Linking Words
Also
, no developed Linking Words
countries
are not able to provide basic facilities to their citizens or basic requirements, so, helping them by giving money, can allow them to buy what they need. Use synonyms
For example
, millions of people living in poor Linking Words
countries
do not have access to food, water or sanitation. Use synonyms
However
, in my opinion, offering the facilities that they need will better their situation more than only offering financial support.
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On the other hand
, practical Linking Words
aid
and advice are more useful to stabilize the economy in the long run. Use synonyms
This
is because undeveloped Linking Words
countries
have several areas that are behind compared with developed Use synonyms
countries
. By providing practical Use synonyms
aid
, the nation will maximize the benefits in the long term as it’s dealing with an aspect of getting trained in the areas where the country falls short , in Use synonyms
this
way, they can sharpen the skills. Recent research concluded that many developing and underdeveloped Linking Words
countries
are not able to heal the most simple diseases and illnesses. I believe that Use synonyms
this
point of view is preferable because it will allow the country to improve, so in the future, they won’t need more help.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
financial donations can help the nation to get better in the short term, providing practical Linking Words
aid
and advice will better their situation in the long term, and Use synonyms
that is
why it is better to offer real help and guidance.Linking Words
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