The bar chart shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
The bar chart illustrates the statistics of people in the workforce that are sales, computing, accounting, nursing, and farming, which were located in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
sales were the highest employed occupation for both 2001 and 2008.
The most occupied jobs in 2001 and 2008 were sales representing 180,000 and around 190,000 respectively. After that, there is computing that was nearly half the former, it was 100,000 in 2001 and then
increased to 110,000 in 2008. Next,
the accounting stood at about 90,000 in 2001 and declined to 80,000 in 2008.
The next two groups were below 50,000. First,
nursing was around a half accounting and slightly rose to approximately 45,0000. Second,
farming was the lowest, in 2001 it was only 30,000 and continued to fall in 2008 to 20,000.Submitted by erniwbs on
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