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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average British household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average British household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart illustrates data regarding the division of
energy
 in an average home in Britain. The second chart demonstrates the proportional amounts of
greenhouse
gas
emissions
 which are produced by
this
energy
 use.
Overall
, the charts show that the greatest proportion of
energy
 in a British household is used
byheating
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by heating
heating
,
although
 it is water heating which is the largest contributor
of
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to
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greenhouse
gas
emissions
. In terms of how
energy
 is divided, cooling demands the lowest
energy
 share of a British home at just 2%. Lighting and refrigeration are the next least
energy
-hungry categories, taking up 4% and 7% of
energy
 respectively. Water heating requires 30%,
while
 just over
two fifths
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two-fifths
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 of an average household’s
energy
 is used by heating. The remainder is accounted for by other appliances. Turning to the ordinary British household’s
greenhouse
gas
emissions
, cooling again reports the lowest figure, contributing 3%. Lighting is responsible for 8%, and refrigeration and heating make almost identical contributions with 14% and 15% respectively. Almost a third of
greenhouse
gas
emissions
 are caused by water heating,
whereas
 other appliances make up the remaining 28%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas, emissions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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