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Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: - Your reason for writing - What you would like to happen - A nice, respectful style

#neighbour #dog #reason #style
Dear Elon, I am writing
this
 letter concerning your dog and how frustrated the
nighbourhood
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neighbourhood
 is from the barks throughout the whole day and night. I know it is hard for you to take care of your dog
due to
 a tight schedule on weekdays. Our neighbours were about to
complaint
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 to the Municipal Corporation but decided to give you a heads up once. What you can do is, hire a part-time dog walker as it would help your pet to get
a
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apply
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quality time and walking generally makes them feel tired resulting in good sleep.
Also
, the winters are coming and it would be better if you would let him stay inside the house as
harsh
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a harsh
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 climate would make
him
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it
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 harder to stay calm.
Thankyou
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 for your consideration and I am looking forward to a positive reply. Yours truly Harshveer
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly state the reason for writing at the beginning of the letter.
task achievement
Consider adding more specific details about the dog's behavior and its impact on the neighbors.
task achievement
Ensure that the letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the overall lexical resource of the letter.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the grammatical range of the letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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