In some countries, more and more are becoming people arebecoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buliding they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Topic Vocabulary:

Historical research
Genealogy
Architectural styles
Heritage
Relics
Oral history
Archival records
Museum exhibits
Historical societies
House tours
Renovation projects
Original blueprints
Careful documentation

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In some countries, more and more are becoming people arebecoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buliding they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?