Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

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has been the decade of technological

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advancements

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astonishing feat after another.

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, a plethora of options have emerged

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recently to strengthen the economy of any

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. Most of the sovereign states hold a belief to upscale their lifestyle alongside economic status

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vocalise by saying that

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pursuing

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necessary

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will vanish

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soon. I opine that though it is a must to improve the

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's wealth, the individuals ought to not forget the earlier teachings and value that has led them to

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point.

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with, the advent of globalisation has created a sense of disparity among people regarding

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's lifestyle. Even though most nations around the globe try to imitate the standards provided by developed nations like the U.S. Efforts by

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of the population to

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inculcate

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offered by other countries pose a great threat to their own.

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a survey, more than 90 per cent of family structure in India used to be a joint

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, but after the exposure to

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style of living has drastically changed to a nuclear

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.

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, social and cultural

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are the points that make every individual unique to

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their

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. As more and more people are drifting towards living apart from family, not following festivals and changing the way they used to live.

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, more than two-thirds of the population have completely changed their mindset and even their lifestyle, all

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match the bar raised by fellow nations.

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, though strengthening the country's economy ought to be the primary objective,

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the

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and

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unique to every

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must not be lost in any case. It's the government's responsibility to ensure

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