Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

This

has been the decade of technological

avancements

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advancements

advancement

, with

one

astonishing feat after another.

Along with

this

, a plethora of options have emerged

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recently to strengthen the economy of any

nation

. Most of the sovereign states hold a belief to upscale their lifestyle alongside economic status

whereas

other

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vocalise by saying that

while

pursuing

this goals

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neccessary

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necessary

social

values

will vanish

off

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soon. I opine that though it is a must to improve the

nation

's wealth, the individuals ought to not forget the earlier teachings and value that has led them to

this

point.

To begin

with, the advent of globalisation has created a sense of disparity among people regarding

one

's lifestyle. Even though most nations around the globe try to imitate the standards provided by developed nations like the U.S. Efforts by

majority

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of the population to

enculcate

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inculcate

values

offered by other countries pose a great threat to their own.

For instance

,

according to

a survey, more than 90 per cent of family structure in India used to be a joint

one

, but after the exposure to

globalisation

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this

style of living has drastically changed to a nuclear

one

.

Furthermore

, social and cultural

values

are the points that make every individual unique to

thier

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their

respective

nation

. As more and more people are drifting towards living apart from family, not following festivals and changing the way they used to live.

For example

, more than two-thirds of the population have completely changed their mindset and even their lifestyle, all

due to

match the bar raised by fellow nations.

To sum up

, though strengthening the country's economy ought to be the primary objective,

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the

values

and

belief

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beliefs

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unique to every

nation

must not be lost in any case. It's the government's responsibility to ensure

this

.