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Some school leavers go traveling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do you think this has more advantages, or disadvantages on their study？

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In
this
 ever-changing world, the issue of whether high
school
 graduates should go on a trip or work compared to directly entering universities is a matter of debate.
While
 there are compelling arguments on the disadvantages of
this
 behaviour, I firmly believe that it has more advantages
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 their study. On the one hand, it is
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understandable
 that some are against skipping
school
 for a
while
. First and foremost, going on a tour or getting a job consumes
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 year of time, which means the graduate's peers might be already digging deeper into a certain field
while
 he or she is engaged in completely irrelevant activities, resulting in
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less competition in the future employment market.
In addition
, having a gap year is likely to take
school
leavers'minds
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leavers
 off studying, abruptly interrupting the study pace they have kept up for more than a decade and leading to a lack
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 concentration when they eventually return to
school
.
For example
, graduates coming back from a year of travelling, during which they kept learning about receiving information new things, may find it too boring to focus on simply studying.
However
, the benefits of having a rest from
school
 far outweigh its drawbacks.
To begin
 with,
this
 experience is largely beneficial to teenagers'
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 abilities.
For instance
, an employee can learn essential skills including communication and multi-tasking, and those returning broadened
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horizons
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from
 the inter-cultural experience of travelling will be equipped with
a
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more broadened horizons.
Moreover
, taking a break would
also
 fuel students about to attend university with more energy, which is significant in maintaining a healthy studying and living attitude in
further
 studies. In conclusion, I can understand the reasons why there would be some negative effects
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 graduates'
study
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 if they stopped attending schools for a period of time, but I would argue that the positive impacts far outweigh the drawbacks it brings.
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