The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how changed
birth
and death
rates
in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to
United Nations statistics.
Starting with 1970, it is observed that over a million
birth
cases registered
and Add a missing verb
were registered
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
death
cases were a
Correct article usage
apply
slighltly
lower than Correct your spelling
slightly
million
. In the next decade, death
rates
left behind birth
rates
reaching 1,3 million
, when birth
rates
stood unchangable
. In 1990, both indices rose slightly, but the Correct your spelling
unchangeable
birth
rate rose even more and again lagged behind the death
rate.
Starting with 2000, there has been only a growth in the birth
rate and only a deacrease
in mortality.
In 2000, Correct your spelling
decrease
birth
rates
reached 2,5 millions
and after Change to singular
million
continiously
growth, in 2020, they reached Correct your spelling
continuously
continuous
to
more than 3 Change preposition
apply
million
. Besides
, death
rates
fall
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fell
upon
700 Change preposition
to
thousands
in 2020.
Change to singular
thousand
Overall
, birth
rates
rose steadily before and after 2000, when there was a drammatical
increase. Correct your spelling
dramatic
grammatical
Besides
, death
rates
also
rose steadily before 2000, but after they started to decrease.Submitted by croownguuard on
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