64.Some people think that younger people are not suitable for important positions in government. Others think that it will be a good idea for younger people to take on these positions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some say that young
individuals
should not participate in important roles in the government
, while
others will argue that is
a good option for younger people
to work
in these positions. This
essay will argue that although
older people
have more experience
working, younger people
have more creativity.
On the one hand, older people
have worked for many years before getting an important position in the government
, this
is because they have more experience
in the job and have done lots of work
. But the young people
do not have any experience
in the field, they may be unable to manage large teams and regulations, if the people
in lower levels work
for a longer time than the young person, will not be happy, so it will be difficult for these people
to work
together. For example
, in the case of militancy in a country, a General would be more effective in mitigating the situation compared to someone who has recently graduated. However
, I believe that nowadays, young individuals
are really smart and can learn things very quickly.
On the other hand
, younger individuals
have more creativity and innovation, which is essential in the modern world. Also
, because of the continued development of the world, young people
at school and at university learn more things than individuals
did before. Furthermore
, young people
have better knowledge about what people
really want and are better at looking for problems and finding solutions. For instance
, young government
health workers successfully raised the awareness of polio vaccines in the country. I believe that, if young people
have the ability, they should be given the opportunity to work
in an important position in the government
.
In conclusion, although
older people
have worked harder and have more experience
in the field, young people
should be given the opportunity to work
in key positions in the government
because they have better innovation.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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