You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I
have
lost my item on the Bogor train line on 2nd November.
I had brought my Unnecessary verb
apply
handbag
with white running shoes and small
towel inside it when I took the train Correct article usage
a small
this
morning. The handbag
is blue with a whitelist and “NIKE”
word on it. I departed from Jakarta Kota station at 7.30 Correct article usage
a “NIKE”
am
. I was in the first carriage, only for Correct your spelling
a.m
woman
, and put my Fix the agreement mistake
women
handbag
in the luggage rack. Then
, I dropped off at Tanjung Barat station and forgot to bring back my handbag
.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if your team would find and keep it for me. If my item has been placed in safekeeping, please inform me where I can retrieve the bag by sending the message to 07654321. Thank you for your
time to consider my report. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Aliya FahiraChange the word
the
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lexico-grammatical
"The handbag is blue with a whitelist and 'NIKE' word on it." Instead of 'whitelist', use 'white list'.
task achievement
Consider including more specific details about the item and its contents.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure coherence between the last paragraph and the rest of the letter.
grammatical range
Review sentence structure and grammar throughout the letter.
