The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese (too fat or much too fat) in one country from 1965 to 2015.

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shows the information on ratio of adults who were overweight or obese in one country between 1965 and 2015.

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, it can be seen that the

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in 2015 was the highest

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of all rates and the

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in 1965 was the lowest

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.

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of all, in the

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20 years between 1965 and 1985, the percentages were nearly the same, it can be seen the percentages of three rates which were not changed at

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time. In 1995,

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time after 30 years the

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shows the

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in 1965, it increased by 10%, up from nearly 50% to over 60%. At

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moment, the

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tended to increase in the near future. In 2005, it went up to over 70%,

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can show that being overweight was a problem which is uncontrolled. In 2015, it was 80% and that was the highest

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of all percentages. After 50 years the

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had appeared in the

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, and the

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increased by nearly 40%, it was the ratio that needed to be resolved in the near future. Looking back at the

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, in the near future, the

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increase more and more and we need to find a solution

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that problem.