The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes in Pebbleton
town
over the period of 20 years. Over the period, Pebbleton was developed considerably, with the resident areas expanding and the modernizing of the road
to enhance local people’s quality of life.
To the northwest of the town
there was an old fort which was completely demolished to construct a playground for children Add a comma
town,
while
a lighthouse remained. Whereas
, to the north of the town
3 new houses and a tennis court were erected to meet the needs of rising
population and entertainment in Correct article usage
the rising
this
town
. Next to the playing field, a new Footpath was built to give access from Coast Road
to the Tennis court.
The original Film studio was flattened to make way for new Flats constructed, while
there is more green space next to the playing field in this
town
than that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
20 years ago. Change preposition
apply
In contrast
, the main infrastructure including Roadbridge, School, Coast Road
, and Old Fort Road
all stayed the same as 20 years ago.Submitted by phongnguyenthanh630 on
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