The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes in Pebbleton
town
over the period of 20 years. Over the period, Pebbleton was developed considerably, with the resident areas expanding and the modernizing of the
road
to enhance local people’s quality of life. To the northwest of the
town
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town,
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there was an old fort which was completely demolished to construct a playground for children
while
a lighthouse remained.
Whereas
, to the north of the
town
3 new houses and a tennis court were erected to meet the needs of
rising
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population and entertainment in
this
town
. Next to the playing field, a new Footpath was built to give access from Coast
Road
to the Tennis court. The original Film studio was flattened to make way for new Flats constructed,
while
there is more green space next to the playing field in
this
town
than
that
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in
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20 years ago.
In contrast
, the main infrastructure including Roadbridge, School, Coast
Road
, and Old Fort
Road
all stayed the same as 20 years ago.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
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