The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates the changes in Pebbleton

town

over the period of 20 years. Over the period, Pebbleton was developed considerably, with the resident areas expanding and the modernizing of the

road

to enhance local people’s quality of life. To the northwest of the

town

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town,

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there was an old fort which was completely demolished to construct a playground for children

while

a lighthouse remained.

Whereas

, to the north of the

town

3 new houses and a tennis court were erected to meet the needs of

rising

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the rising

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population and entertainment in

this

town

. Next to the playing field, a new Footpath was built to give access from Coast

Road

to the Tennis court. The original Film studio was flattened to make way for new Flats constructed,

while

there is more green space next to the playing field in

this

town

than

that

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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20 years ago.

In contrast

, the main infrastructure including Roadbridge, School, Coast

Road

, and Old Fort

Road

all stayed the same as 20 years ago.

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