The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph provides information about the modifications of copper, nickel and zinc during every month in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen a significant downward trend which spreads on Nickel. Also
, it’s noticeable that copper had a general slight decline in price
changes during the period of time. However
, zinc showed an upward trend in modifications of cost.
Nickel had a dramatic increase from January to June
(from 6 to -3 per cent
). After, the data showed a slight rise till the period of time when the price
remained stable (from June
to September). The price
fell slightly to -1 per cent
from September to October. At the end
of 2014, it could be seen that the price
went up considerably from October to December (from -2 to 1 per cent
).
Copper grew gradually from the beginning of the year till May (from 2 to -0.5 per cent
). After that, it climbed gradually to 1 per cent
in June
and remained constant till September. There was a slight jump till the end of the year (from 1 to 0,5 per cent
).
On another hand, zinc showed an increase from June
to February (the price
went up by 2 per cent
). Also
, the metal showed a sharply
drop of 4 per Change the adverb
sharp
cent
from February to June
. In addition
, the data remained stable from June
to October. After, the metal provided a significant soar till the end of 2014 (from -1 to 2 per cent
).Submitted by fedorusa2016 on
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