The charts show the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 taking part in cultural activities and sports in Australia in 2003.
The charts below give information about the proportion of both genders aged from 5 to 14 participating in cultural events and
sports
in Australia in 2003. The above bar chart illustrates the percentage of boys
and girls
joining four different kinds of activities whereas
the below shows only the rate for doing sports
in both genders.
As can be seen from the graphs, most students
preferred sports
to other activities shown by a much higher number of boys
and girls
while
we can see that fewer female students
took part in sports
than male ones.
It is clear from the first chart that there were four main kinds of outside school hours activities for students
namely drama, dancing, singing and playing musical instruments. According to
the data, the number of girls
who like to dance was the highest with 25 girls
compared to only 2 boys
. However
, there were more boys
playing the musical instruments than girls
. In addition
, the numbers of boys
and girls
were nearly the same for students
who attended drama club and singing.
The second chart depicts the total number of boys
and girls
doing sports
in 2003. As is observed, more boys
like to play sports
compared to girls
with 70 out of 55 students
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