The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The table shows the amount of money spent on
fairtrade
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coffee
and bananas
in two separate years in the UK
, Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. It is clear that
sales
of Fairtrade
coffee
rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales
of Fairtrade
bananas
only went up in three out of the five countries. Overall
, the UK
saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.
In 1999, Switzerland
had the highest sales
of Fairtrade
coffee
, at 3 millions
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euros
, while
revenue from Fairtrade
bananas
was highest in the UK
, at 15 millions
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. By 2004, however
, sales
of Fairtrade
coffee
in the UK
had risen to 20 millions
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, and this
was over three times higher than Switzerland
's sales
figure for Fairtrade
coffee
in that year. The year 2004 also
saw dramatic increases in the money spent on Fairtrade
bananas
in the UK
and Switzerland
, with revenues rising by 32 millions
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euros
and 4.5 millions
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respectively.
Sales
of the two Fairtrade
products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in sales
of Fairtrade
coffee
can be seen, but revenue remained at 2 millions
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euros
or below in all three countries in both years. Finally
, it is noticeable that the money spent on Fairtrade
bananas
actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.Submitted by 61021035l on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
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