The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The table shows the amount of money spent on
fairtrade
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coffee
and
bananas
in two separate years in the
UK
,
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
It is clear that
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but
sales
of
Fairtrade
bananas
only went up in three out of the five countries.
Overall
, the
UK
saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products. In 1999,
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
, at 3
millions
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euros
,
while
revenue from
Fairtrade
bananas
was highest in the
UK
, at 15
millions
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euros
. By 2004,
however
,
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
in the
UK
had risen to 20
millions
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euros
, and
this
was over three times higher than
Switzerland
's
sales
figure for
Fairtrade
coffee
in that year. The year 2004
also
saw dramatic increases in the money spent on
Fairtrade
bananas
in the
UK
and
Switzerland
, with revenues rising by 32
millions
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euros
and 4.5
millions
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euros
respectively.
Sales
of the two
Fairtrade
products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
can be seen, but revenue remained at 2
millions
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euros
or below in all three countries in both years.
Finally
, it is noticeable that the money spent on
Fairtrade
bananas
actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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