The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The provided line chart reflects different types of criminal actions,

as well as

, the number of each case that had been committed in a span of 35

years

from 1970 to 2005 in two European countries.

According to

the given graph, there were three kinds of crimes: car theft, house burgling, and street robbery.

Overall

, after a thorough analysis of the provided line chart, it can be plainly viewed that car theft was in the first place the most commonly committed crime across the

years

while

street robbery came

last

In addition

, house burgling underwent several fluctuations, before

Correct pronoun usage

its

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rates moderately decreased. In the beginning, concerning car theft, rates were progressively uplifting in the course of 20

years

between 1970 and 1990, which reached 1

million

cases

in the year 1990.

However

, in 1995, it experienced a sharp rise ( scored 1.60

million

cases

), before hitting a free fall in 2005, which recorded 1

million

cases

Furthermore

, moving to house burgling, witnessed variations over a period of 30

years

(from 1970 to 2000),and hit 0.60

million

in 2000,

this

period was followed by a plummet to 0.45

million

cases

in 2005.

Moreover

, it is worth noticing that street robbery remained static from 1970 to 1990, before witnessing a mild upward trend to 0.20

million

cases

in 2000 and 2005, simultaneously.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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