You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about you, to express my long-standing concerns about hot water and heating. I am contacting you, but there is still no response from you. I was very disappointed to find
this
. Because this
is a necessary thing for every day.
The house I bought from you, the necessary things do not work in it. I do not expect such
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disappointed
from you and I hope you will understand my circumstances. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problems as soon as possible.
If I do not hear from you before November, I shall be obliged to take matters a step Replace the word
disappointment
further
, and it will be worse than you expect. I no longer have a way out of this
problem that I am facing. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
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Yours
Your
faithfully,
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