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Band 5.5

You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flatmates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about you, to express my long-standing concerns about hot water and heating. I am contacting you, but there is still no response from you. I was very disappointed to find
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. Because
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 is a necessary thing for every day. The house I bought from you, the necessary things do not work in it. I do not expect
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disappointed
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 from you and I hope you will understand my circumstances. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problems as soon as possible. If I do not hear from you before November, I shall be obliged to take matters a step
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, and it will be worse than you expect. I no longer have a way out of
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 problem that I am facing. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
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 faithfully, Amir

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coherence cohesion
Make sure to address the specific reason for writing in the beginning of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Improve the organization and flow of ideas between paragraphs.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely.
grammatical range
Pay more attention to sentence structure and grammar.
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