All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

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era overweight and obesity becoming major

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many young kids and adults

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lifestyle

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overweight

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is having junk food

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individuals who are getting foods and

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beverages

from different franchise may have

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of salt and other spices they may result in gaining weight

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number of people through advertisement and social posters

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students may feel dizzy during their study which

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in bad conduct of discipline and getting bad grades in their curriculum to mitigate

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issue parents should spend some time with their kids and make them

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to play physical games that will result in burning some calories another

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impact

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on lifestyle to elaborate it

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advancement of technology

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people get everything easily to their door steps without having a walk for

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to cite an example most developed countries introduce new ideas and technology that ease the lifestyle of

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being through the invention of internet everything is accessible now

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obesity

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a bad impact on any age of human government and

educational

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the educational

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sector should introduce

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them pull toward the burning of fats and make the living worthwhile