Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
email regarding the missing bag that I left on your flight. I figured it out when I got back to the hotel. On 1st October 2023, I took the flight AC107 from Hanoi to Toronto, bringing two carry-on baggage.
However
, when I got off the plane, I forgot one handbag. I would appreciate it if you could help me to find my luggage. It is important because I put my company’s documents inside and I need them for my meeting next week. My bag is a small black suitcase. It has a name tag, “AMBER,” and my number, “4379810886,” at the back of the case. At the front, there is the brand name Samsonite in yellow colour. There is only one handle, and the size is around 45cm and 30cm. If you find my bag, please inform me where I can come to get it. My email address is [email protected], and my number is 4379810886. I am looking forward to getting information from you. Thanks, and best regards, Amber
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