The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.
The chart demonstrates how many people visited a museum during a 15-year interval up to 2012, which is based on three different kinds of visitors.
In general, what stands out from the chart is that the least amount of
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number surged to more than 400,00 visitants, which was the peak of Linking Words
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, during the next five years, it dropped to 380,000 in 2012 which was still the maximum amount in comparison with the other visitor cohorts.
Turning to the special exhibition entrants and adolescents, it can be seen that the former was the smallest group from 1997 to 2012 and the growth of visitors number was deeply minor; so, Linking Words
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